I AM ALIVE

Lifeless days and solitary nights
Without you
Weighed heavy on my brow
In drugged stupor, my dreams cried
To touch and feel you
Split between virtual and reality
Sorrow, extremely painful
Hung like a curtain
Through smoke screen
Hazy you, looked uncertain
Forgotten memories of promises
‘I Do’
Yes ‘I do’ tore in me
Tears welled in my eyes
To quench my own thirst
My heart skipped a beat
Fresh and pink exactly like my dream
Today on the station
You stood looking for me with a frown
Back into my life like a song
My heart again is singing melodies
Forgotten
With a tender kiss after so long
Today like a breeze you tease me
And leave me breathless
I pinch myself
Again and once again
I am alive
Yes I am alive!!
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prateek
glad you liked it...have anice day
madhvi
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thanks blizzard
madhvi
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Thats a good poem...has a good mix of all the emotions...liked it very much...
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Doc,
Nice one here!

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thanks sbchand for liking the poem
have a great day
madhvi
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Bhavana
thanx to both of you for appreciating
Madhvi
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thanks isha. its a great compliment
Madhvi
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thanks shani thats a great compliment
have a nice day
madhvi
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Main Yahan Kisi Se Nahi Darta, Mujhe Koi Pehla Likhne Waala Pasand Aaya Ya Jis Se Main Sochta Hun Meri Rooh Ka Competition Hai, Wo Tum Ho..............
Tum Ek Sachhi Writer Ho Apna Likha To Sabko Pasand Aata Hai, Mujhe Pasand Kuch Tabb Aata Hai Jabb Koi Mujhse Achha Likhe.
Mujhe Tumhara Aur Bhavna Ka Blog Choo Gaya, You Both Have Touched The Soul N Have Defined Commitment Better Than Anyone.
Thanks Doc, Shani
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Nice thought.
Thanks Madhvi
Mastufa
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