I AM ALIVE

Lifeless days and solitary nights
Without you
Weighed heavy on my brow
In drugged stupor, my dreams cried
To touch and feel you
Split between virtual and reality
Sorrow, extremely painful
Hung like a curtain
Through smoke screen
Hazy you, looked uncertain
Forgotten memories of promises
‘I Do’
Yes ‘I do’ tore in me
Tears welled in my eyes
To quench my own thirst
My heart skipped a beat
Fresh and pink exactly like my dream
Today on the station
You stood looking for me with a frown
Back into my life like a song
My heart again is singing melodies
Forgotten
With a tender kiss after so long
Today like a breeze you tease me
And leave me breathless
I pinch myself
Again and once again
I am alive
Yes I am alive!!
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Dear Dr Madhavi,
Spellbound you stand when unexpected but greatly desired wish takes place----one's own eyes do not believe that it has happened----for a while, one's mind is disoriented with happiness and joy ----this is what happens and you say----is it a dream----Am I still alive.
And you have very nicely portrayed the feelings emanating from such happenings in life---whether on a railway station or the wilderness of a jungle. Great reading it made. Regards. Rajee.
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You have given beautiful meaning to the picture . Amazing write with beautiful feelings .Take care. GOD bless you.
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Wow!!This is so beautiful!!! I am just lost in magic of your words.. Some times I wish to be your patient
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dear Doctor,
this is precisely what should be on the prescription:)) .Yes indeed,reunions rejuvenate,
hope you get the nod from the judges.
Q
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Full of the rich and sad contradictions and other transient pains in life. As someone said: " Any blow that does not kill you makes you stronger..."
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Truly romantic with brimming passion. The reunion has full of life and your versus are really marvelous. Enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing.
With regards,
Vijay
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Dr Madhvi,
good one ... on love
reffy
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too good a romantic madhavi with a romantic poem..sunkan
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Doctorji,
The reunion brings lot of life and every thing will be alive again..........
Nice poem and lovely words......... like........dreams cried..... and ... hung like a curtain........etc.,.
Thanks for the poem
Prasad
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